You're Beautiful

March 24, 2010
By thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
67 articles 0 photos 336 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."


You're beautiful
The way you smile
The way you laugh
The way you speak.
You're beautiful
The way you look at me
Hold me in your arms.
You're beautiful
The way you listen to me
The way you play with my hair.
You're beautiful
The way you hold my hand
And squeeze it when things aren't right.
You're beautiful
When you look in my eyes
And I know that you love me.
You're beautiful
In the way that no one can understand
In the way that I love you
You're beautiful
In the way that you don't exist.



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on Dec. 3 2010 at 7:44 pm
MargaretJean PLATINUM, Robins, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"I was outta luck the day the music died." -American Pie (the song)

eeee i'm so excited for you. i would buy it!

on Jun. 27 2010 at 11:21 am
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
67 articles 0 photos 336 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

thanks -- i actually am creating a poem book. thx for the suggestion!

wiinga BRONZE said...
on Jun. 11 2010 at 12:53 am
wiinga BRONZE, Kwigillingok, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
Never give up, no matter what you go through.-Anonymous

I LOVE THIS! and thats again for ur comment on my piece! this piece is amazing! dont ever stop writing! it would also be awesome if u wrote a poetry book :D cuz all ur poems are great!

on Apr. 23 2010 at 3:29 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

that is awesome.

poohbear777 said...
on Apr. 19 2010 at 9:33 am
Fantastic insights, as usual, from this author.  I'd like to see the name of the poem changed to "The Perfect Guy" so silly guys like me will understand right away! :)

kysh15 said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 8:30 pm
kysh15, Edmonds, Washington
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so good!!! but so sad at the end but I still love it!

jill456 said...
on Apr. 12 2010 at 10:50 pm
this poem made me think. all the way through i was thinking "aww what a sweet guy" and "shes so lucky to have him" but then when i read the last line, i was confused. but then i understood. the best guys dont exist...and thats truly sad. very nice job on this...one of my favorites

on Apr. 12 2010 at 11:34 am
I love it hun. And that's true the perfect guy really doesn't but there are guys close to it.

on Apr. 11 2010 at 9:11 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
67 articles 0 photos 336 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

It's about the perfect guy...and that he doesn't exist.

Venus_Queen said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 9:08 pm
I liked this one! but may i ask what or who its about?


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