Stare At My Toes

March 24, 2010
By thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."


Do you feel good about yourself?
When you see the tears
crawling down my face?
Do you smile, smirk, snicker
when you sense my discomfort?
Your laugh rings loud in my ears
even though I can't hear it.
I stare at my toes.

Do you like chopping my hair off?
Freezing my bra?
Prank calling me at night?
Pointing your fingers and laughing
Laughing to make youself feel better
To feel that self-ressurance everyone yearns for.
I had that.
You know I had that.
You knew what you were doing when you took it away.
When you turned everything to ashes
As all I did, was stare at my toes.



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Susie Miller said...
on Oct. 9 2010 at 7:45 pm
Susie Miller, Pleasanton, California
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so sad...hope this hasnt actually happened to you. but so well written! great job

jill456 said...
on Apr. 12 2010 at 10:48 pm
this poem can be told from girls all around the world. the best thing to do is exactly what you have done: write an amazing poem out of it. very nice job...

PrezLover101 said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 9:21 pm
whoever did this is a real jerk. im sorry for that experience! but great poem!!!!!

Venus_Queen said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 9:09 pm
i know what you mean in this! this is really good! :}


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