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love.

March 23, 2010
By mkgirl395 GOLD, Coppell, Texas
mkgirl395 GOLD, Coppell, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"My friend, let's not think of tomorrow, but let's enjoy this fleeting moment of life."
-Omar Kyyam


love is about two, and the one they will become.

love can be strong without lasting long.

love washes away sorrow, but leaves behind pain.

love tears at the heart, and leaves a stain.



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on Jun. 16 2010 at 10:54 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

THis is really good!!! i like it!!! please check out some of my work!!! :)

on Apr. 14 2010 at 8:54 am
amazingkp. BRONZE, Lemars, Iowa
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That is really good! I like it a lot. Check out some of my writings i think you will like them. (And comment if you like.) Keep writing!

on Apr. 13 2010 at 5:46 pm
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

i really like this. I mean honestly when i saw the title i thought to myself, oh gosh another sappy love poem. But when i read it i was really surprised and thoroughly enjoyed it. you say so much with so little words. Amazinggg job. two thumbs up!! =]

on Apr. 13 2010 at 5:44 pm
CoffeeShopChick BRONZE, Rawr, New Jersey
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Agreed :) i love the first line

on Apr. 11 2010 at 9:01 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

Wow this is really good! My favorite line is the first one. That left an impression on me. Way to put all your emotions into such simple words and phrases that mean so much. Great job! Check out some of my work if you'd like. Keep writing!