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BARB WIRE

March 27, 2010
By 20Autumn14 GOLD, Ely, Nevada
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Barb wire, barb wire
why do you hate me.
why did I bring you
in to my life.

You are very sharp.
You temp me to cut
myself and now
you have your wish.

© Asia B., Hudson, MA

The author's comments:
if you are emo and you put your life at risk every day then you should really think about the people that you hurt each day when you make a cut. if you do have a friend who does this then talk to them tell them that they are hurting you and everyone around you with every slit and stab that they do to their body get them some help. Really before it is to late.
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Eilatan GOLD said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 9:58 am
Eilatan GOLD, Old Greenwich, Connecticut
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i really liked this, i have a friend who used to have these sort of problems before she went into counseling so i can connect to this, very well written- keep writing!!!!