You make me feel...

March 4, 2010
By EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."


You make me feel….
So many things….
So many different emotions…
So many words…
Too many to describe…

Your shaggy brown hair…
So brown its black…
Your smile…
I used to think was cute…
Your shirt, so different from everyone else’s…
I can always tell its you…
With that shirt…
I think I may have memorized the colors…
The texture…
The exact design…
Scary, I know, for someone who doesn’t like you anymore…
At least, I don’t think I do…


My mind is filled…
Filled with anxiety…
Filled with dreams…
Filled with problems…
That need to be fixed…
You are one of them…
One of those problems…
One of the issues that needs to be helped…



I need to let go…
To forget you…
To remember you’re a jerk…
To remember I’ve held on for too long…
To remember that you’re not mine…
To remember…
It won’t happen…
‘We’ won’t happen…
Until you like me…
Which I am not planning on…
Because I know if I dream, it only wounds my heart…
If I think about you, it only burns me…

I thought I was done…
I thought I was over you…
I thought my dreams had slipped away…
Then suddenly…
I took an overdose, of you…
Too much talk…
Of you…
Too much…
They prank called you…
I laughed to hide my confusion…
For I hadn’t talked to you in a while…
I barely remembered you…
I bumped into you in the hallway…
They showed me pictures of you…
I started to notice you again…
And I fell…
Again…
And I can not climb up again…
I am too weak to get out of this hole…
Again…


The author's comments:
maybe this should be a poem...
but pretty much this is exactly how i would describe my feelings..

enjoy <3

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on Apr. 12 2010 at 7:09 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

Yahh, while I read this back in my mind, I think they do take away from it, but thanks for the constructive critisism, it helps to make my other articles better!!! Thanks a ton, I really appreciate it!!! ;)

on Apr. 12 2010 at 7:08 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

Thank you for your support!!!! <3

on Apr. 12 2010 at 7:07 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

kk, I'll deff. check your article out!!! Thanks soo much by the way <3

on Apr. 10 2010 at 7:04 pm
MeghanMichelle GOLD, Hooksett, New Hampshire
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Great poem. I think all the ellipses kind of take away from it a little bit.

on Apr. 10 2010 at 6:08 pm
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.

I like this.....

on Apr. 10 2010 at 11:02 am
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

This is great!I know just what you mean. You should check out my poem The Rain; I think you would like it!




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