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The last moment of my life

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I walk down the alley
Feeling…nothing but darkness
Seeing …nothing but shadow
Speaking...nothing but silence
I walk down the alley

I run to you crying
Wondering…if I’m ok
Thinking…that I’m no good
Hating…the fading light inside
I run to you crying

I watch this blood running
Knowing…that you can’t help
Falling…down this trap inside
Cutting…myself from you
I watch this blood running

I sleep on this empty floor
Dreaming…about you and me
Crying…from the pain in my heart
Wishing…that you were by my side
I sleep on this empty floor

I hold this gun to my head
Hoping…that you will never know
Praying…that someone would stop me
Screaming…wanting to be found
I hold this gun to my head

I sink to my knees defeated
Closing…my heart can’t do this anymore
Falling…I can’t live like this anymore
Drowning…what more is there to life
I sink to my knees defeated

I look at your picture on my wall
Wondering…if you were truly happy with me
Smiling…for the last time before I was gone
Darkness…The blood comes rushing down
I look at your picture on my wall





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lostnhim said...
Apr. 10, 2010 at 11:19 am
This is a really sad peice. You are a great writer.
 
darkness replied...
Apr. 12, 2010 at 8:28 pm
thanks I loved this piece because it depicts so much emotion.
 
Milo! said...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 9:27 pm
This is really good! i really like how it flows and is easy to relate to. I hope to see more work from you! I would love it if you would read some of my work. I think you would like it.
 
darkness replied...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 12:12 pm
I will definitly read some of your work. Thanks
 
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