The last moment of my life

March 16, 2010
By darkness SILVER, Pheonix, Arizona
darkness SILVER, Pheonix, Arizona
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I walk down the alley
Feeling…nothing but darkness
Seeing …nothing but shadow
Speaking...nothing but silence
I walk down the alley

I run to you crying
Wondering…if I’m ok
Thinking…that I’m no good
Hating…the fading light inside
I run to you crying

I watch this blood running
Knowing…that you can’t help
Falling…down this trap inside
Cutting…myself from you
I watch this blood running

I sleep on this empty floor
Dreaming…about you and me
Crying…from the pain in my heart
Wishing…that you were by my side
I sleep on this empty floor

I hold this gun to my head
Hoping…that you will never know
Praying…that someone would stop me
Screaming…wanting to be found
I hold this gun to my head

I sink to my knees defeated
Closing…my heart can’t do this anymore
Falling…I can’t live like this anymore
Drowning…what more is there to life
I sink to my knees defeated

I look at your picture on my wall
Wondering…if you were truly happy with me
Smiling…for the last time before I was gone
Darkness…The blood comes rushing down
I look at your picture on my wall

The author's comments:
nothing really inspired me to write this poem it just sort of came to me at the library. I don't know why I wrote it but only because I felt like it should be written and so therefore I wrote it. I hope people will understand that depression is not the most amazing thing to have in life and that it can lead to more dangerous roads. I just want people to also understand me from my poetry and understand that I have problems also and that I'm not the greatest.

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on Apr. 12 2010 at 8:28 pm
darkness SILVER, Pheonix, Arizona
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thanks I loved this piece because it depicts so much emotion.

on Apr. 10 2010 at 11:19 am
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
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Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

This is a really sad peice. You are a great writer.

on Apr. 7 2010 at 12:12 pm
darkness SILVER, Pheonix, Arizona
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I will definitly read some of your work. Thanks

Milo! said...
on Apr. 6 2010 at 9:27 pm
This is really good! i really like how it flows and is easy to relate to. I hope to see more work from you! I would love it if you would read some of my work. I think you would like it.




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