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March 15, 2010
By jt317 BRONZE, Bainbridge Island, Washington
jt317 BRONZE, Bainbridge Island, Washington
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Dripping mango slice, gooey,
Amber orange glow across
A distant ripple
Of dark sand
Of hazy cotton laced over smiling
Seeds, a low fire above an empty
Awakening, a blind man's pure eyes
Suddenly burned at the lashes, lost,
A rebirth of view, of proportion, of thought,
As one can only see in the day, it is that we should see
The world best in its shadow.

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on Dec. 16 2010 at 9:43 am
theevilcupcake, Greer, South Carolina
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again..fantastic! i love all your work but this def has to be the BEST! keep it up!

on Oct. 29 2010 at 9:00 am
the_real_reggie_rocket BRONZE, Spostylvania, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"I like to move it, move it."-Anonymous

While reading this poem, I imagined everything I read. You are very descriptive, and your flow is easy to read. I enjoyed this poem a lot. :)

on Oct. 29 2010 at 6:01 am
theheartthatbleedsthecolorsofquietchaos GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
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I LOVE this (:

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