Wishes Are Lies

March 15, 2010
By VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?


When I asked you want you wished for,
You said you didn't know.
I realized later on,
That you wanted to be by him.

When I asked you what you wished for,
You didn't hesitate to answer.
You wished we could stay friends forever,
when you wished for me to leave.

When I asked you want you wished for,
You said you didn't know.
I realized later on,
That you wanted to be by him.

When I asked you what you wished for,
You couldn't tell me.
So intead you told me a lie,
That tore us apart.

If I could have one wish,
I would wish for the impossible.
I would wish for your happiness,
But then I would be lying.



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on May. 19 2010 at 6:07 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

Thank so much for commenting on my work1 I really appreiceate it! :)

on May. 18 2010 at 4:08 pm
Elizabeth-Martin PLATINUM, Georgetown, Massachusetts
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When life gives me a reason to cry, I'll show life that I have 1000 reasons to smile.

hey! you commetnted on my "I love you" poem. so im checking yours out. i really loved this one. one of my favorites now (:

on May. 12 2010 at 3:40 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

Thank you very much! :)

on May. 11 2010 at 9:17 pm
Allykattz PLATINUM, Rehoboth, Massachusetts
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"This much I know is true That God blessed the broken road That led me straight to you"-Rascal Flatts

This is great and I agree with HiddenWillow, i love the ending.

on Apr. 30 2010 at 6:45 pm
talia_is_happy GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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"The people who mind- don't matter, and the people who matter- don't mind."
-Dr. Seuss

=P You made me tear up you jerkface!

on Apr. 30 2010 at 5:16 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

Yep! :)                    

on Apr. 30 2010 at 4:19 pm
talia_is_happy GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who mind- don't matter, and the people who matter- don't mind."
-Dr. Seuss

...I'm a horrible friend aren't I.

on Apr. 6 2010 at 7:20 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

Your welcome. Thanx for commenting. :)

on Apr. 6 2010 at 7:15 pm
HiddenWillow SILVER, Norwalk, Wisconsin
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If you're not closer to God today than you were yesterday, guess who moved.

ic. :>  Thanks. 

on Apr. 6 2010 at 7:06 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

Its not a poem to a best friend. Its more like about how I can tell when shes lying to me and how she likes someone but doesnt know it herself yet and what would happen if I asked her about it. 

on Apr. 6 2010 at 6:15 pm
HiddenWillow SILVER, Norwalk, Wisconsin
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If you're not closer to God today than you were yesterday, guess who moved.

The first part of the poem is a little hard for me to understand.  Is this a poem to a best friend who would rather be with a boyfriend?  I like the clincher at the end where you share your wish and tie it in with "but then, I would be lying." 

--HiddenWillow--



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