March 15, 2010
By brootalxbrent BRONZE, Lincoln Park, Michigan
brootalxbrent BRONZE, Lincoln Park, Michigan
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the feeling of losing a loved one
when nothing seems fun
the time depression silently hits
i suddenly feel like a bottomless pit
i had turned to the thought of suicide
all i feel is broken inside
i sat for days and cried
i cant believe you lied
why did i even try
you said you would be there every second
now your gone what happened
forever is never
i should have known from your laughter
guess we weren't true
i loved you
but its over
I'm sober
all i feel is empty
the only something
that made me full
ate my heart whole
time to rest my empty soul

The author's comments:
hmmm, what inspired me to right this piece? this poem was written the night that my girlfriend of 8 months left me for someone else

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