Distance MAG

March 14, 2010
By FindingMe SILVER, Richmond, Virginia
FindingMe SILVER, Richmond, Virginia
6 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love...and be loved in return. (Moulin Rouge)


My chest hurts as I breathe in, and
my vision is blurry because of my tears.

I hear Mommy calling my name over
the crackling noise that scares me.

I try to find, but I can't.
I can't find enough air to
tell her my door is too hot, and every time
I try to open it, my hands feel like they're melting.

But then I see Mommy outside the window and
lots of flashing lights. I bang on my window to
let her know I'm here, but then I hear a cracking above me.

I can't hear Mommy's voice anymore … but I hear Daddy's.



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Kalee SILVER said...
on Sep. 29 2011 at 9:03 pm
Kalee SILVER, Double Oak, Texas
8 articles 1 photo 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is a game in which everyone cheats.

This was really intense.(:

army said...
on Feb. 3 2011 at 11:08 am
i love the

on May. 2 2010 at 7:08 am
TanazMasaba GOLD, Dhaka, Other
16 articles 10 photos 214 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You've gotta dance like there's nobody watching,
Love like you'll never be hurt,
Sing like there's nobody listening,
And live like it's Heaven on Earth."













---William W. Purkey

not bad but u shud work a little more on the details. This one is lovely




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