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Forever and Slashed

March 14, 2010
By delilahsky PLATINUM, Arlington, Massachusetts
delilahsky PLATINUM, Arlington, Massachusetts
28 articles 3 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just because her eyes don't tear doesn't mean her heart doesn't cry. And just because she comes off strong, doesn't mean there's nothing wrong






-Author Unknown


Silent whispers; and in thy name,
unbreathed glory, emotion but tame.
A silent life, a life lived dead,
hateful regret by words unsaid.
Forward, backward, hard and slice
Frigid screams, bodies of ice.
What pointless visits by angels come,
Young Satan stole a girl, and numb.
Oh heavy darkness, oh pain surreal,
Oh slashed veins forever can’t heal.
Through hope spoken, and unheard
Love though never, still preferred.
Faces; how innocent and passing by,
Forlorn child and her sobs, deny.
How hopeless, and in its name,
All but a thing one child to blame.
The eternal gift; tonight final breath,
Swallow young tears, forever in death.



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AriM said...
on May. 21 2010 at 3:27 pm
i love the rhymes and the end gives you chills, but not in a bad way, there's so much emotion there

on May. 20 2010 at 6:38 pm
delilahsky PLATINUM, Arlington, Massachusetts
28 articles 3 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just because her eyes don't tear doesn't mean her heart doesn't cry. And just because she comes off strong, doesn't mean there's nothing wrong






-Author Unknown

Thank you so much!

on May. 20 2010 at 2:19 am
feartheuntypical GOLD, Nelson, Other
13 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
A writer is somebody for whom writing is more difficult than it is for other people.
- Thomas Mann

It's amazing

on Apr. 19 2010 at 2:05 pm
delilahsky PLATINUM, Arlington, Massachusetts
28 articles 3 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just because her eyes don't tear doesn't mean her heart doesn't cry. And just because she comes off strong, doesn't mean there's nothing wrong






-Author Unknown

Glad to hear it!

arithefriend said...
on Apr. 10 2010 at 2:05 pm
Gabs, this is rly beautiful and sad and emotion invoking and I love it. :)

on Apr. 5 2010 at 4:04 pm
delilahsky PLATINUM, Arlington, Massachusetts
28 articles 3 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just because her eyes don't tear doesn't mean her heart doesn't cry. And just because she comes off strong, doesn't mean there's nothing wrong






-Author Unknown

Meimei I love you!

Meiling said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 4:03 pm
You are so amazing <33 This is fabulous.