Alive

March 22, 2010
By MessOfADreamer PLATINUM, North Tonawanda, New York
MessOfADreamer PLATINUM, North Tonawanda, New York
22 articles 2 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I write for the same reason I breathe -- because if I didn't, I would die." -Isaac Asimov


I just keep reaching, retreating
Hoping to get through the beating
You’re feeding, I am not in control
You have the power to dig me deeper
Into the hole, you know,
But you’re the only one who can
Get me to go, to show
Everything hidden inside
Wrap me up saying “you’re mine”
Wipe off the tears that I cry
Just biding your time
You’re breaking my heart
But you’re all that keeps me alive


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Sarbear GOLD said...
on Apr. 10 2010 at 8:01 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
10 articles 4 photos 489 comments

Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.

your welcome! keep writing! =)

on Apr. 10 2010 at 6:13 pm
MessOfADreamer PLATINUM, North Tonawanda, New York
22 articles 2 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I write for the same reason I breathe -- because if I didn't, I would die." -Isaac Asimov

Thank you, I appreciate the comment. That's what I was going for. :)

Sarbear GOLD said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 6:42 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
10 articles 4 photos 489 comments

Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.

this is great, i like how you showed that you were torn and didn't know how you felt. i love your work--check out some of mine?


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