Goodbye

March 19, 2010
By sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."


I don't know how we got here,
or why;
All I know is that I could
never say goodbye to you
But see, I'm certain this is
exactly what I must do
You are now flying away from
the nest and as horrifying as
it is,
I understand it's for the best;
Because you will soon be
gone love,
as aesthetic and graceful as a
dove;
I can't even fathom how long
this pain will last, but in order for it to pass on, I need to
let go of our past.
You're finally able to spread
your wings and soar through
the sky;
I am aware now that I must
finally say my goodbyes



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on May. 17 2010 at 11:12 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

Loooooooove it!  ;)  As before, very touching, full of feeling and flows with a unique-ness.

-Rose


on May. 9 2010 at 9:40 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
29 articles 0 photos 267 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

of courrse!! (: luv 2

on May. 5 2010 at 11:20 pm
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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=) please come check out my work too~! <3

on May. 3 2010 at 7:53 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
29 articles 0 photos 267 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

lol thxx u!!:))

on May. 1 2010 at 11:29 am
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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very nice poem! although it's a sad poem, i find it very cute =) haha. nice work!

on May. 1 2010 at 10:21 am
hello.beautiful PLATINUM, New York, New York
35 articles 29 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Look at the nations and watch— and be utterly amazed. For I am going to do something in your days that you would not believe, even if you were told. -Habakkuk 1:5

This is really good.

You're a great writer.


on Apr. 7 2010 at 10:26 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
29 articles 0 photos 267 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

thank u so much! i really appreciate the feedback!!

on Apr. 5 2010 at 10:37 pm
JustMeAriee BRONZE, Beaumont, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Because I care about you too much to look you deeply in the eyes it's because youve changed."
"If your looking for love and its staring you in the face then whyy are you questioning it?"

this is one of the best poems i have ever read i really like it alot great job!!




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