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I don't know how we got here,
or why;
All I know is that I could
never say goodbye to you
But see, I'm certain this is
exactly what I must do
You are now flying away from
the nest and as horrifying as
it is,
I understand it's for the best;
Because you will soon be
gone love,
as aesthetic and graceful as a
dove;
I can't even fathom how long
this pain will last, but in order for it to pass on, I need to
let go of our past.
You're finally able to spread
your wings and soar through
the sky;
I am aware now that I must
finally say my goodbyes



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BleedingRose said...
May 17, 2010 at 11:12 am

Loooooooove it!  ;)  As before, very touching, full of feeling and flows with a unique-ness.

-Rose

 
SilverDawn said...
May 1, 2010 at 11:29 am
very nice poem! although it's a sad poem, i find it very cute =) haha. nice work!
 
sasssgirrrl22 replied...
May 3, 2010 at 7:53 pm
lol thxx u!!:))
 
SilverDawn replied...
May 5, 2010 at 11:20 pm
=) please come check out my work too~! <3
 
sasssgirrrl22 replied...
May 9, 2010 at 9:40 pm
of courrse!! (: luv 2
 
caughtinamoment said...
May 1, 2010 at 10:21 am

This is really good.

You're a great writer.

 
<3JuxxMeeh<3 said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 10:37 pm
this is one of the best poems i have ever read i really like it alot great job!!
 
sasssgirrrl22 replied...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 10:26 pm
thank u so much! i really appreciate the feedback!!
 
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