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She Left the Earth (maybe)

I cried for you tonight
I'm afraid I've lost
you, lost you for good...
Lost my best friend, until
I go to heaven

I'm scared that you've actually
left this time...



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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 11, 2010 at 6:22 pm:
this is really sad and emotional and well written. very nice.do your dance.
 
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Whisperer said...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 9:13 pm:
this is really short but also really touching. good work :) i love it
 
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deardiary said...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 8:19 pm:
Wow, it says so much in so little words. The title is especially revealing- love it!
 
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Eilatan This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 6:43 pm:
How beautiful...
 
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yesimdarrian101 said...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 11:43 am:
this was really touching and deep. good job. :)
 
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kiwi12 said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 6:52 pm:
daw, this touches me so deeply. Very evocative. Good job!
 
iliketac0s replied...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 7:20 pm :
thanks              
 
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iliketac0s said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 4:55 pm:
kk, I'm going to look at both of your writing.
 
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ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 3:16 pm:
This is very nice. Keep writing. If you have time, please check out my work. Comments and ratings are greatly appreciated.
 
iliketac0s replied...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 4:58 pm :
and also, thanks
 
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KayKays222 said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 2:38 pm:
I like this and I can relate to it. You should read some of my stuff and tell me what you think.
 
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