March 16, 2010
Brown beautiful hair. Gorgeous green eyes staring into yours. The smile slowly appearing across her face. Her nose so small, like a button. The way she looks is pretty damn stunning. She looks in the mirror. The smile disappears. Inside the mirror is nothing.

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Paper_Poetic said...
Jul. 18, 2010 at 5:28 pm
this is really good! :D your poems are great.
beautifuleyess12 replied...
Aug. 21, 2010 at 4:14 am
Thank you so much :D
thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 7:41 pm
This is really good! It's a very thought-provoking. The best poets make their readers think, and that's exactly what I'm doing now. Check out some of my work if you'd like. Keep writing!
beautifuleyess12 replied...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 11:39 pm
Thank you so much. I like the comment. It does make readers think. And I will gladly read some of yours . Thank you again<3
Sheevani said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 11:11 pm
This is amazingg. i love youu. and all your poems. :)
beautifuleyess12 replied...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 12:52 pm
Thank you. That means a lot. I love you too <3
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