Invisible

March 16, 2010
By beautifuleyess12 BRONZE, St.Cloud, Florida
beautifuleyess12 BRONZE, St.Cloud, Florida
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Brown beautiful hair. Gorgeous green eyes staring into yours. The smile slowly appearing across her face. Her nose so small, like a button. The way she looks is pretty damn stunning. She looks in the mirror. The smile disappears. Inside the mirror is nothing.



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on Aug. 21 2010 at 4:14 am
beautifuleyess12 BRONZE, St.Cloud, Florida
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Thank you so much :D

on Jul. 18 2010 at 5:28 pm
Paper_Poetic GOLD, Highland Village, Texas
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this is really good! :D your poems are great.

on Apr. 11 2010 at 11:39 pm
beautifuleyess12 BRONZE, St.Cloud, Florida
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Thank you so much. I like the comment. It does make readers think. And I will gladly read some of yours . Thank you again<3

on Apr. 11 2010 at 7:41 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

This is really good! It's a very thought-provoking. The best poets make their readers think, and that's exactly what I'm doing now. Check out some of my work if you'd like. Keep writing!

on Apr. 6 2010 at 12:52 pm
beautifuleyess12 BRONZE, St.Cloud, Florida
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Thank you. That means a lot. I love you too <3

Sheevani said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 11:11 pm
This is amazingg. i love youu. and all your poems. :)




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