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Love is No More!

Love me
all I ever wanted was your love
You only gave me lip
I begged and pleaded and asked once more
but you said nothing, and walked out the door
I tired to drag you back
but you shoved me aside
and grumbled under breath" love is no more"





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kitkat555 said...
Sept. 6, 2010 at 2:09 pm
this was a great poem! i really like it. It's pithy! short and to the point. 5 out of 5! 
 
iWriteToExpressThouqhts said...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 9:00 pm
great work =]
 
Zazawish777This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 5:45 pm
thanks a bunch!
 
Zazawish777This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 4:41 pm
ok, i'm sorry. I di dnot mean to publish 2 of the same kinds of poems with a different title.
 
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse replied...
Sept. 14, 2010 at 10:05 pm

Smooth  haha

I commented on the other one

 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 1:17 pm
This is a very positive message captain,kind of ironic. do your dance. 5 stars.
 
Zazawish777This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 5:54 pm
thanks a bunch!
 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 7:12 pm
ofcoursism.
 
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