Love is No More!

March 9, 2010
By Zazawish777 GOLD, KC, MO, Missouri
Zazawish777 GOLD, KC, MO, Missouri
16 articles 2 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
life isn't passing me by, it's trying to run me over!


Love me
all I ever wanted was your love
You only gave me lip
I begged and pleaded and asked once more
but you said nothing, and walked out the door
I tired to drag you back
but you shoved me aside
and grumbled under breath" love is no more"


The author's comments:
this is something that I'm sure goes in every girls life. maybe.. we should treasure what we have and not take things for granted. Cherish things with love and never let go.

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on Sep. 14 2010 at 10:05 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

Smooth  haha

I commented on the other one


kitkat555 said...
on Sep. 6 2010 at 2:09 pm
this was a great poem! i really like it. It's pithy! short and to the point. 5 out of 5! 

on Aug. 24 2010 at 7:12 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

ofcoursism.

on Aug. 24 2010 at 5:54 pm
Zazawish777 GOLD, KC, MO, Missouri
16 articles 2 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
life isn't passing me by, it's trying to run me over!

thanks a bunch!

on Aug. 24 2010 at 5:45 pm
Zazawish777 GOLD, KC, MO, Missouri
16 articles 2 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
life isn't passing me by, it's trying to run me over!

thanks a bunch!

on Aug. 23 2010 at 9:00 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

great work =]

on Aug. 20 2010 at 4:41 pm
Zazawish777 GOLD, KC, MO, Missouri
16 articles 2 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
life isn't passing me by, it's trying to run me over!

ok, i'm sorry. I di dnot mean to publish 2 of the same kinds of poems with a different title.

on Aug. 20 2010 at 1:17 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

This is a very positive message captain,kind of ironic. do your dance. 5 stars.


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