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I told you I loved you.
You said "So what?"
I told you I missed you.
You said "Who cares?"
I told you I’m deleting you off my phone.
You said "Good"
I texted you from my friend’s phone:
"What am I doing wrong?"
You sent back, "You breathe"



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Nessa13 said...
Dec. 14, 2012 at 5:04 pm
Wow...I read this, and it's like I felt your pain...amazing! You are amazing!
 
MidnightAngel7 said...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 8:31 pm

Ah-mazing! Not suprising, you are a very talented writer. Guys are jerks arn't they?

 

 
LoveLikeWoe replied...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 6:07 pm
awhh well thanks! :) and yes. yes they are.
 
splenda. said...
Jul. 5, 2010 at 3:34 pm

this was oober good. i really liked it :)

btw, will you check out and comment my work? thanks.

 
LoveLikeWoe replied...
Jul. 7, 2010 at 3:27 pm
haha thanks (: and i will
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 16, 2010 at 9:27 pm
wow this is very good but terrible that someone would do something like that!!! how rude!!! i'm so sorry if this happened to you!!! (btw thanks for checking out my work).
 
LoveLikeWoe replied...
Jul. 4, 2010 at 9:43 pm
ur welcome! and it did. :
 
brittles said...
May 5, 2010 at 12:32 pm

i think your poem is sad but truthful

people can be harsh.

loved it tho

 
~*)Wish(*~ replied...
May 9, 2010 at 11:07 am
thanks!! :)
 
~*)Wish(*~ said...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 4:29 pm
well that's just awkward... who was i talking to?!
 
~*)Wish(*~ said...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 4:27 pm
well. this is a short one :/
 
~*)Wish(*~ said...
Mar. 27, 2010 at 11:10 pm
awh :) thank you!! and i definitely will!!
 
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