Rejected

March 12, 2010
By LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.


I told you I loved you.
You said "So what?"
I told you I missed you.
You said "Who cares?"
I told you I’m deleting you off my phone.
You said "Good"
I texted you from my friend’s phone:
"What am I doing wrong?"
You sent back, "You breathe"



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Nessa13 GOLD said...
on Dec. 14 2012 at 5:04 pm
Nessa13 GOLD, Charlestown, Indiana
18 articles 0 photos 109 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love, but never fall in love, because things that fall get broken"
-Taylor Swift

Wow...I read this, and it's like I felt your pain...amazing! You are amazing!

on Aug. 1 2010 at 6:07 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

awhh well thanks! :) and yes. yes they are.

on Jul. 21 2010 at 8:31 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
61 articles 36 photos 216 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

Ah-mazing! Not suprising, you are a very talented writer. Guys are jerks arn't they?

 


on Jul. 7 2010 at 3:27 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

haha thanks (: and i will

on Jul. 5 2010 at 3:34 pm
splenda. SILVER, Century, Florida
6 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fiction is obliged to stick to possibilities. Truth isn't." Mark Twain

this was oober good. i really liked it :)

btw, will you check out and comment my work? thanks.


on Jul. 4 2010 at 9:43 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

ur welcome! and it did. :

on Jun. 16 2010 at 9:27 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

wow this is very good but terrible that someone would do something like that!!! how rude!!! i'm so sorry if this happened to you!!! (btw thanks for checking out my work).

on May. 9 2010 at 11:07 am
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

thanks!! :)

brittles GOLD said...
on May. 5 2010 at 12:32 pm
brittles GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
13 articles 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
today is not a tragidy
when the power of love over comes the love of power the world will know peace -jimi hendrics

i think your poem is sad but truthful

people can be harsh.

loved it tho


on Apr. 19 2010 at 4:29 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

well that's just awkward... who was i talking to?!

on Apr. 15 2010 at 4:27 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

well. this is a short one :/

on Mar. 27 2010 at 11:10 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

awh :) thank you!! and i definitely will!!


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