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She wants to be loved the way she loves
She wants to fly the way birds fly
She wants to be free like the lion
To live life and not cry

She wants to be just like the others
She wants to be different in her own way
She wants to believe in a good everything
And to her, here is what I say-

To be loved, that is how you fly
To be free, you never have to cry
Life is just a lesson, preparing you for your dreams
Feelings are God-given
You will soon learn what that means

When you love




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SecretSelf14 said...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 9:29 am:
- Wow I Loved It. :]
 
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Kiersten said...
May 25, 2010 at 10:35 pm:
wow.... if i could get goosebumps, i'd have them right now... this is really good... it felt like i had.... a balloon in my heart, and that it was getting bigger and bigger!!:P very inspirational!! love it!!
 
JeanGrey replied...
May 27, 2010 at 1:12 am :
Thanks :) Not my favorite of my poems, but probably one of the more emotional ones :)
 
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frog-prince said...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 7:51 pm:
this is amazing you realy have an awesome talent! =)
 
JeanGrey replied...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 8:03 pm :
Thanks...but not as awesome as yours :)
 
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Venus_Queen said...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 7:48 pm:
omg T this is good!!! oh and i hit my 200 thingy!! so plz tell Nick that :{ god i didnt mean to just stop talking to him plz tell him that :{
 
AprilBlue replied...
Apr. 24, 2010 at 10:08 pm :
T i hit 200 limit nothing I can do if you see this tell everyone else
 
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lovestruck said...
Apr. 16, 2010 at 1:22 pm:
i love it it is very true. it have good flow and i think it's a great topic
 
JeanGrey replied...
Apr. 16, 2010 at 4:14 pm :
thanks :)   
 
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CharlotteC said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 7:58 pm:
Wow I really love the meaning behind this it is great
 
JeanGrey replied...
Apr. 16, 2010 at 4:14 pm :
thank you ;)
 
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Pensive?Gurl said...
Apr. 12, 2010 at 5:50 pm:
whoo! i'm with Unknown!
 
JeanGrey replied...
Apr. 12, 2010 at 5:51 pm :
ayayayayya :) thanks
 
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Unkown45 said...
Apr. 9, 2010 at 4:05 pm:
This is very amazing.:]
 
JeanGrey replied...
Apr. 10, 2010 at 6:05 pm :
Thank you. :)
 
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ZAVERY said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 11:08 am:
This is a work of art!!!!
 
High-above-de-world replied...
Apr. 9, 2010 at 2:53 pm :
Oh my gosh! I love the way your poetry flows! The style of writing is amazing, and you just think of the most meaningful subjects! Mind reading me work?
 
JeanGrey replied...
Apr. 10, 2010 at 6:04 pm :
Thank you very much...i didnt think i would have such positive reactions :) they mean alot to me :)
 
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MentalBreakDown said...
Mar. 26, 2010 at 8:40 pm:
i like it =)
 
JeanGrey replied...
Mar. 26, 2010 at 8:41 pm :
Really? Thanks! That means alot to me :)
 
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