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When you don’t know where to look
Just close your eyes,
When you don’t know whom to trust
Look at your reflection with a dazzling smile.
And when the lights go out,
Leaving you in the dark
Don’t reach for a candle,
Just search for the light.

When danger creeps closer blocking all escapes
Leaving you with no choice but to hide,
Face your greatest fear
And you’ll know if there is really anything to fight.

When one single path ends in a million directions
And you don’t know which one to choose
Just follow your heart ‘cause if you are true
At the end of every wrong turns
There’s a blessing waiting for you.

Finally when there is no more worry
And you have nothing to do
Sit down and think of me,
For I’ll always be thinking of you.





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The_Capricornian said...
Oct. 23, 2013 at 3:51 pm
Did I just read Coldplay lyrics? :-P  Very good, I liked it.
 
love2love17 said...
Sept. 8, 2010 at 5:00 pm
Oh my goodness this is so beautiful! I love it!
 
Tanaz_Masaba This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 8, 2010 at 11:46 pm
:P thnx n pls check out som of my other works too
 
Sunshineyday said...
Apr. 12, 2010 at 4:50 pm
nice poem. sounds like a hallmark card, but in a good way
 
Yvaine_96 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 12:24 am
uh....thnx......comment on my other works if u got time
 
Yvaine_96 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 3, 2010 at 8:15 am
sure its no big deal, i understand ur request completely.....n if u got time, com by any time, cuz i got this article waiting to be approved n its good
 
ZAVERY said...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 7:35 pm
That's just a beautiful poem!!!
 
MyFairyTaleEnding said...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 2:15 pm

I agree with everyone here! This is sooo sweet and amazing! You are seriously an amazing writer! Please please PLEASE keep writing!!!!!!!!!! :D

If you have spare time, could you critic my work? I need REALLY good writers to critic me with all they've got! Thank youu!!

AMAZING...sorry I can't get over that... xD

 
~Air~ said...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 12:48 pm
Aww, it was really sweet! I just read all three of your submissions, and  think you are an amazing writer! My favorite was the first one, but this poem is really beautiful. Keep writing, and one day you will achieve your dream.
 
Sarbear This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 6:02 pm
oh my gosh! that is wonderful. i love how you were actually talking to the reader. very unique and i know everyone can relate to this poem at some time in their life. well done
 
Yvaine_96 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 4:42 am
thnx!! im more of a poet dan a writer, in poetry i seem to express my feelings better. n u guys r awesome too!!
 
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