Unknown Soldier

March 10, 2010
By superswim_19 PLATINUM, Grand Haven, Michigan
superswim_19 PLATINUM, Grand Haven, Michigan
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Who is the Unknown Soldier?
Who was it who died an unknown death?
In an unknown place,
With an unknown feeling in his heart?


Does he have an unknown family?
In an unknown neighborhood,
With an unknown burden to bear?

Is the Unknown Soldier with us now?
Watching us in his unknown ways,
With his unknown eyes filled with tears?

He is thinking now,
I want to be known



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on May. 2 2010 at 7:29 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

we'll see...I'll read your stuff. if you think its not that good then try to make it better. its the improvement process. but hey-you're good.

on May. 2 2010 at 7:11 pm
superswim_19 PLATINUM, Grand Haven, Michigan
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thanks, thanks a lot! that really means a lot to me! nobody ever comments on any of my stuff but some of its not that good.

on Apr. 21 2010 at 9:44 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

 I think I figured out teen ink. these writers take the worst writers and comment on their stuff and give them the best comments. but they take the best stuff- and they say absolutely nothing. so if you're wondering why this peice doesn't have any comments -it's because you're good, really good. I'm sure you really hit home for the soldier. hes probrably think-somebody gets it. finally somebody gets it.




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