My girl

March 9, 2010
By mauricio negrin BRONZE, Farmington, New Mexico
mauricio negrin BRONZE, Farmington, New Mexico
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My girl shes so sweet,
when I hugged her earths stops
Sometimes when i see her sometimes i cant breath
she makes me feel very special i cant believe shes all for me
you who she is because shes the prettiest girl at school
with her curly pretty black swing from side to side
so i tell her baby i love you i cant believe your all mine


The author's comments:
This piece was inspired by my girlfriend monisha and she means lot to me because she is helping stay sobered.

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on Mar. 31 2010 at 8:47 pm
mauricio negrin BRONZE, Farmington, New Mexico
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Thanks guys

 


on Mar. 31 2010 at 8:47 pm
mauricio negrin BRONZE, Farmington, New Mexico
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Thanks guys

Asian_Girl said...
on Mar. 30 2010 at 11:07 am

btw its Gillian lol

 


Asian_Girl said...
on Mar. 30 2010 at 11:05 am
this poem is good! good job mauricio

SNOOP! said...
on Mar. 29 2010 at 4:05 pm

good job mauricio i love i think that she will love it to 

~DEIDRA~


Snoopy~ said...
on Mar. 29 2010 at 3:57 pm
Thats so nice of you Mauricio ~ Markay 

on Mar. 28 2010 at 11:39 am
mauricio negrin BRONZE, Farmington, New Mexico
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Thanks :) she really does mean lot to me

on Mar. 24 2010 at 4:34 pm
amazingkp. BRONZE, Lemars, Iowa
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That's sweet. I like it. Good luck.


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