Unbalanced love

March 6, 2010
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Love is neither precise nor accurate for example.
How is it when you laugh i cry.
When you jump i fall.
When you walk i crawl.
When you speak i am silent.
When you can breath i get breathless.
When your surrounded im in solitude.
When your asleep i am awake.
How my days seem so grey and yet yours are as bright as day.
When your up im down.
And if im wrong i would be glade to earse this poem





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thorn said...
Mar. 21, 2010 at 1:02 am
wonderful poem and the last line sets it off great!
however it is much more professional to fix those spelling and grammar errors :)
 
LostChild replied...
Mar. 28, 2010 at 1:35 am

Thanks i will

 

 
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