Exquisite Pain

March 4, 2010
By , Santo Domingo, Dominican Republic
No need to search around to pour me another doze
I now see what you’ve been doing all along
using your venomous gaze
to string me around
with both daggers and lace
ever so addictively
like a love spiked mace
nevermore.





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Grania This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 20, 2010 at 12:47 pm
"Love-spiked mace" Awesome image!
 
EDeCa This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 9:35 pm
thank youu I really appreciate the feedback :)
 
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