You said 'I love you'.

March 1, 2010
By loveu BRONZE, Kalispell, Montana
loveu BRONZE, Kalispell, Montana
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Favorite Quote:
"i hate you, but i need you, because i love you".


Sometimes I fall asleep, crying about you.
Sometimes I fall deep down, and everything I had I lose.
The only real pain I've ever felt, was when you said three words.
Three small and quiet words, but still they seemed to hurt me.
I tried to be strong,
I tried to forget,
but each time I saw you,
my heart beat quick.
I thought you were different,
from every other boy I knew,
but you proved me wrong,
and to this day,
I'm still heart broke over you.
You said we could be friends,
but that doesn't make me see,
because the day you broke my heart,
you took the rest of me.


The author's comments:
I thought that you were different...

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on Apr. 20 2010 at 7:17 pm
LoveNmhyLiife BRONZE, Roanoke, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Its easy to fall inlove but it's very hard to fall out of it"

i love this poem thys it speaks to mhe szhp much keep writing and comment my poem called You Said by SzhoHurt

The Kid said...
on Mar. 16 2010 at 7:43 pm
Wow. I've been there. Very deep. :) good write.


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