Senses

March 1, 2010
By MargoSwim33 PLATINUM, Richmond, Virginia
MargoSwim33 PLATINUM, Richmond, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
never frown, because someone may have fallen in love with your smile


I could smell the sunshine in his hair,
The rays of light as they hit his gorgeous blonde locks.
I could see the pain in his eyes,
The sorrow caused by a fall on the mountains rocks.
I could taste the sweetness on his lips,
They honeysuckle sugar staining his lips.
I could sense the love that he felt for me.
The love that everyone wants at their fingertips.

The loves that gives people the senses to believe that their love is true.
Smell the sunshine and remember how far you’ve come.
See the pain as a reminder of who’s hurt you.
Taste the sweetness as if it were your last day.
Sense the love that made you….who you are today.



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on Jun. 20 2010 at 12:40 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

thankyou so much!!!

on Jun. 20 2010 at 10:01 am
MargoSwim33 PLATINUM, Richmond, Virginia
20 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
never frown, because someone may have fallen in love with your smile

Thanks so much! I'm not huge into poetry but when I get into the mood I guess it just kinda flows. I'll definetly check out your work

on Jun. 20 2010 at 7:27 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

this is sooo sweat!!! really good!!! i love how you wrote it! i hope that you'll check out some of my work when you get the chance!!:)


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