Senses

March 1, 2010
I could smell the sunshine in his hair,
The rays of light as they hit his gorgeous blonde locks.
I could see the pain in his eyes,
The sorrow caused by a fall on the mountains rocks.
I could taste the sweetness on his lips,
They honeysuckle sugar staining his lips.
I could sense the love that he felt for me.
The love that everyone wants at their fingertips.

The loves that gives people the senses to believe that their love is true.
Smell the sunshine and remember how far you’ve come.
See the pain as a reminder of who’s hurt you.
Taste the sweetness as if it were your last day.
Sense the love that made you….who you are today.





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Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 20, 2010 at 7:27 am
this is sooo sweat!!! really good!!! i love how you wrote it! i hope that you'll check out some of my work when you get the chance!!:)
 
MargoSwim33 replied...
Jun. 20, 2010 at 10:01 am
Thanks so much! I'm not huge into poetry but when I get into the mood I guess it just kinda flows. I'll definetly check out your work
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 20, 2010 at 12:40 pm
thankyou so much!!!
 
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