Just want to be alone

March 1, 2010
By Zazawish777 GOLD, KC, MO, Missouri
Zazawish777 GOLD, KC, MO, Missouri
16 articles 2 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
life isn't passing me by, it's trying to run me over!


 you see that girl, over their...
you see her tears, flowing like a stream
you know that she wished she could be like the air..
only invisible, but yet she's always their.
 
you know that girl, that stands alone...
you see her hide behind every possible place
and yet you do nothing that's shown.
you rarely see her face around a crowd
and you know,.. (you know)..  she wants to  be alone.
 
you see that girl, over their...
having the wind shake her hair..
and you know, she wishes she could be like the air.
floating everywhere..  ( you know she wants to be alone)
while hiding her face, that practically scarce.
 
 
 you know that girl, that stands alone...
you see her hide behind every possible place
and yet you do nothing that's shown.
you rarely see her face around a crowd
and you know,.. (you know)..  she wants to  be alone.

she's that girl, the type of girl..
that you would never know
that she was standing next to you
you would wave across the room
while staring right through that girl
the girl that wants to be alone.


The author's comments:
I just want to express my self, and be creative with words and imagination.

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on Sep. 8 2010 at 6:36 am
Zazawish777 GOLD, KC, MO, Missouri
16 articles 2 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
life isn't passing me by, it's trying to run me over!

thanks a bunch! i just wanted to add, that this poem was sorta like a song to me. thanks for rating and commenting! i would love to hear from ya.

on Sep. 6 2010 at 2:12 pm

This was really good. Very good meaning!

5 stars


on Aug. 20 2010 at 3:19 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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awesomeness.

on Aug. 20 2010 at 2:27 pm
Zazawish777 GOLD, KC, MO, Missouri
16 articles 2 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
life isn't passing me by, it's trying to run me over!

thanks! i will rate ur stuff 2!

on Aug. 20 2010 at 1:16 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

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Get, Got, Gotten.

I really like your stuff and i love the last line in this one. do your dance captain.

on May. 12 2010 at 11:33 am
Zazawish777 GOLD, KC, MO, Missouri
16 articles 2 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
life isn't passing me by, it's trying to run me over!

hey, thanks so much on your comment! it means a lot to me. thanks. and i will  comment on your work! 

on May. 12 2010 at 9:57 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

wow, this is great. you write about some i really deep stuff. i like it a lot :) way good, and easy to relate to. awesome :) would you mind commenting on some of my work?

on May. 10 2010 at 6:05 pm
Zazawish777 GOLD, KC, MO, Missouri
16 articles 2 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
life isn't passing me by, it's trying to run me over!

thanks! it means a lot

eric69 said...
on Mar. 16 2010 at 5:35 pm
hey! I LOVE YOUR WORK! it has great meaning! keep writting and never give up on writting! go for it!

on Mar. 16 2010 at 5:30 pm
Zazawish777 GOLD, KC, MO, Missouri
16 articles 2 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
life isn't passing me by, it's trying to run me over!

this is one of my poems. i hope you like!


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