Just want to be alone

 you see that girl, over their...
you see her tears, flowing like a stream
you know that she wished she could be like the air..
only invisible, but yet she's always their.
 
you know that girl, that stands alone...
you see her hide behind every possible place
and yet you do nothing that's shown.
you rarely see her face around a crowd
and you know,.. (you know)..  she wants to  be alone.
 
you see that girl, over their...
having the wind shake her hair..
and you know, she wishes she could be like the air.
floating everywhere..  ( you know she wants to be alone)
while hiding her face, that practically scarce.
 
 
 you know that girl, that stands alone...
you see her hide behind every possible place
and yet you do nothing that's shown.
you rarely see her face around a crowd
and you know,.. (you know)..  she wants to  be alone.

she's that girl, the type of girl..
that you would never know
that she was standing next to you
you would wave across the room
while staring right through that girl
the girl that wants to be alone.





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writter_nostop said...
Sept. 6, 2010 at 2:12 pm

This was really good. Very good meaning!

5 stars

 
Zazawish777 replied...
Sept. 8, 2010 at 6:36 am
thanks a bunch! i just wanted to add, that this poem was sorta like a song to me. thanks for rating and commenting! i would love to hear from ya.
 
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 1:16 pm
I really like your stuff and i love the last line in this one. do your dance captain.
 
Zazawish777 replied...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 2:27 pm
thanks! i will rate ur stuff 2!
 
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 3:19 pm
awesomeness.
 
dreamer_believer said...
May 12, 2010 at 9:57 am
wow, this is great. you write about some i really deep stuff. i like it a lot :) way good, and easy to relate to. awesome :) would you mind commenting on some of my work?
 
Zazawish777 replied...
May 12, 2010 at 11:33 am
hey, thanks so much on your comment! it means a lot to me. thanks. and i will  comment on your work! 
 
eric69 said...
Mar. 16, 2010 at 5:35 pm
hey! I LOVE YOUR WORK! it has great meaning! keep writting and never give up on writting! go for it!
 
Zazawish777 replied...
May 10, 2010 at 6:05 pm
thanks! it means a lot
 
Zazawish777 said...
Mar. 16, 2010 at 5:30 pm
this is one of my poems. i hope you like!
 
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