Profound Beauty

February 28, 2010
By xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3


Your smile captivates me like
the sky contains of the sparkling
stars and blinding-white moon;
It pierces me through-and-through;
As bright as the ozone layer,if you
can only believe;
Those eyes, crystal blue, remind me
profoundly of the infinite, sun-glistened seas where I no longer
drown my self-control



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on Mar. 17 2010 at 7:32 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 281 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

lol thxxx soo much!

i cant wait til more of ur work comez on

here.

im actually waiting for "reluctance", 1 of my newest 2 come on here & am working on putting some other poem as well :)))

thxx again 4 the feedback

on Mar. 16 2010 at 5:16 pm
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x PLATINUM, Nanuet, New York
24 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To me, Fearless is not the absense of fear. It's not being completely unafraid. To me, Fearless is having fears. Fearless is having doubts. Lots of them. To me, Fearless is living in spite of those things that scare you to death."
— Taylor Swift

awww..that's soo cute. i luv it.

love the opening

"your smile captivates me.."

you really start to feel what the narrator feels.

good work, as always

<3


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