Profound Beauty

February 28, 2010
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Your smile captivates me like
the sky contains of the sparkling
stars and blinding-white moon;
It pierces me through-and-through;
As bright as the ozone layer,if you
can only believe;
Those eyes, crystal blue, remind me
profoundly of the infinite, sun-glistened seas where I no longer
drown my self-control





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xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x said...
Mar. 16, 2010 at 5:16 pm
awww..that's soo cute. i luv it.
love the opening
"your smile captivates me.."
you really start to feel what the narrator feels.
good work, as always
<3
 
xBaByGiRrL22x replied...
Mar. 17, 2010 at 7:32 pm
lol thxxx soo much!
i cant wait til more of ur work comez on
here.
im actually waiting for "reluctance", 1 of my newest 2 come on here & am working on putting some other poem as well :)))
thxx again 4 the feedback
 
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