My sugar is sour

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Your roses are red my roses are black.
Your violets are blue my violets are green.
Your sugar is sweet my sugar is sour.
You love me and I hate you.





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reillysmiley22 said...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 5:46 pm
very strong, feirce, inspirational
 
cjsweetie replied...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 11:00 am
Thank you very much for for commenting. The poem just kinda happened. i didnt put much feeling into it on purpose.
 
Sarbear This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 3:07 pm
very unique... nice job. keep writing!!!!
 
BasketballChick5 replied...
Mar. 31, 2010 at 8:58 pm
Suprisingly i really liked it:)
 
JeanGrey said...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 12:20 pm
hahahah very cute! i like it!
 
cjsweetie replied...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 12:28 pm
Thank you :)
 
Milo! said...
Mar. 12, 2010 at 4:01 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
 
cjsweetie replied...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 10:14 am
Thanks alot
 
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