Vinegar MAG

February 26, 2010
By abbystartsriots SILVER, Turner, Maine
abbystartsriots SILVER, Turner, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"They sicken of the calm who know the storm." (Dorothy Parker)


This week smelled of
vinegar; it oozed from
the kitchen and into my
nose, it sunk in-
to the fibers of
my clothes.
This week smelled of
vinegar,
and I don't
want you any longer.


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on May. 22 2015 at 11:42 am
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

I love the relation of vinegar to (I'm assuming) a tough breakup(?). The whole idea gave me a very - pungent - imagery of what was going on. I could almost smell the vinegar as I read this, and that's just want you want to happen to your reader... Not that smelling vinegar is a good reward for your reader, but that it gives them the perfect sense of the speaker's feelings. Bravo!

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on Dec. 24 2014 at 12:22 pm
Alia_S BRONZE, Monmouth Junction, New Jersey
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Whoops, sorry about that. The new comment format threw me off for a second. What I meant to say was that I quite like this piece. :) It is charmingly simple.

Alia_S BRONZE said...
on Dec. 24 2014 at 12:20 pm
Alia_S BRONZE, Monmouth Junction, New Jersey
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Did you know you can now tag other users using "@"?


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