teenage relationships

February 24, 2010
By cricket18 BRONZE, Kalispell, Montana
cricket18 BRONZE, Kalispell, Montana
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you look at me
I look at you
I think of all we've been through
you smile at me
I dont smile back
you wonder why the worlds gone black
my heart is cold
the days are old
you remind me who i used to be
that girl

the end.

I look at you
you look at me
you think of what we used to be
I smile at you
you wont smile back
I know the world isn't completely black
your hearts not cold
the days arnt old
you showed me who I want to be
your boy

no end.

The author's comments:
i wrote the first half of this in my ex-boyfriends note book and when i went to read it again he had written the second part. i thought it was super sweet and worthy of being in a magazene

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