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D.D. (for Ashley

March 4, 2010
By Anonymous

Dark in Charleston. The rain
throwing itself to the street.

Each drop a Southern hussy
Falling carelessly

that they might be as drunk
as she is. Stumbling,

arm around my shoulder.
The other hand pointing

towards some other party
like a pirate points to land

but I see no haven.
She sticks her tongue out

catching no drops
and I feel my eyes water

not only from the smell of warm beer
on my dress, but because

I remember a girl so alive.
And now I am watching her

dig her grave
With a silver spoon.

Do I also dig?
DO I bear the blame?

Sister, feel the rain.



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ceriseLN said...
on Apr. 25 2010 at 6:45 pm
I really like this poem its very strong.

NiaraStorm said...
on Apr. 23 2010 at 12:33 pm
NiaraStorm, Greenwood Village, Colorado
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May your trails be crooked, winding, lonesome, dangerous, leading to the most amazing view. May your mountains rise into and above the clouds.













Edward Abbey

wow...That's really good.    i think you should try helping her, btw. but that just me.

GREAT POEM!


Eilatan GOLD said...
on Apr. 22 2010 at 6:27 pm
Eilatan GOLD, Old Greenwich, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"Nobody is normal. Everybody in the world is a weirdo freak. Except you, which makes you a weirdo freak."

Wow!!!! This is INCREDIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!

onlyiz said...
on Apr. 21 2010 at 7:19 pm
onlyiz, Boulder, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
“You can't depend on your eyes when your imagination is out of focus.” - Mark Twain

nice.

JessieB SILVER said...
on Apr. 21 2010 at 6:32 am
JessieB SILVER, Elkton, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
an eye for an eye, and the whole world goes blind~Ghandi

i love the metaphor with the rain. i know what its like dealing with an alcoholic and you hit the feeling I get when on the dot.

Amazing(:


on Apr. 20 2010 at 8:07 pm
aliveonink GOLD, Rochester, Minnesota
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 wow this is really good!

on Apr. 20 2010 at 3:38 pm
psychedelic_wAves, Austin, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Life sucks, but in a beautiful kind of way"~ Axl Rose quote

watching yourself............... a bluntly beautiful poem i can't describe the feeling it gives me

on Apr. 20 2010 at 3:15 pm
ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything."-Tyler Durdan -Fight Club-

very cool.

thechlo BRONZE said...
on Apr. 20 2010 at 2:46 pm
thechlo BRONZE, Harrisburg, Pennsylvania
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this poem is beautiful. I write on the sae topic very often.

on Apr. 20 2010 at 12:02 pm
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.

I like the word pictures. I wrote a poem on the same thing. I like it.