March 3, 2010
By georgiab PLATINUM, Whitman, Massachusetts
georgiab PLATINUM, Whitman, Massachusetts
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In a room all by myself,
Can you hear me calling?
I’m calling for help.
It seems like the walls are six feet thick,
What lasted for months
Happened so quick.
Well I tried and tried and tried,
To break down the wall
to get to your side.
The harder I push and the louder I call,
I loose faith that you’ll be there
When I break through this wall.
Never is a long time,
If I never see your face,
Forever’s even longer
When I count the walls I’ll have to break.

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on Aug. 30 2010 at 11:47 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

wow, the message in this is so powerful. you are a truly great writer! the ending leaves me literally wanting more.

check out some of my work, too if you'd like. great job on this! keep writing!!(:


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