mirror

March 3, 2010
When I look in that mirror
I see horror
I see terror
I see an unleashed beast
I see darkness and sadness
I see angels and demons battling
I see goodness being buried alive by badness
I see darkness eliminating light
I see fear and tears
Tears that turned into a stream of blood
I see a soul collector executing a shadow
I see the shadow being cremated
Then
I see the shadow’s ashes reincarnating
Into the shadow it was
I see it being dragged into the underworld
I see Death rising up
The stream of blood
With a skull in one hand
I see Death throw the skull at the mirror
I see the mirror shatter
And scatter
Just then
I see the shadow again
But now I recognize
Whose shadow it was
It was my shadow
It belonged to me…
And only me…





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Kingfan123 said...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 10:02 am
This was filled with so much of everything! Really jumped out and caught your attention! Good job!
 
condor replied...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 12:12 pm
omg thank you so much :]
 
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 11, 2010 at 4:58 pm
this is full of so much emotion..and turmoil...and misery...and death...and...well, you know....5 stars.
 
condor replied...
May 12, 2010 at 6:31 pm
omg thank you sooooooooo much<3
 
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 12, 2010 at 7:56 pm
oui, oui captain.
 
condor replied...
May 13, 2010 at 10:20 pm
um....u mean sara...?
 
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 13, 2010 at 10:28 pm
what is a sara?
 
condor replied...
May 13, 2010 at 10:29 pm
lol my name?
 
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 13, 2010 at 10:35 pm
I thought somebody told me you were a guy. sorry-you can still be the captain if you like....
 
condor replied...
May 13, 2010 at 10:38 pm
omg lol thats ok
 
Lucy(: This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 6, 2010 at 7:34 pm

great finish.

very full

check out my work to (:

 
condor replied...
Sept. 6, 2010 at 9:19 pm
thx and i will =]
 
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