the Big Bang

Same time - same place
We were in the right place at the right time
Paths have crossed
Presents have collided
Futures exploding before us
Altering always and forever
You changed me
You fixed me
You healed me
You loved me
Thanks for that.





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Squishy-Squish said...
Mar. 12, 2010 at 6:37 pm
Short, simple, and absolutely fantastic.
 
rainbowwriter said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 5:31 pm
This is a really good piece of writing. I really think so! Congratulations! You really got the point across and still wrote it well.
 
BMMSKC said...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 6:17 pm
I READ A LOT OF VAMPIRE BOOKS AND THIS SOUNDS LIKE WHAT HAPPENS WHEN YOU FIND YOUR SOULMATE...WISH I COULD FIND MINE...LOVE THE POEM TOO...KEEP WRITING
 
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