the Big Bang

February 24, 2010
By littlemsawkward ELITE, Holbrook, Massachusetts
littlemsawkward ELITE, Holbrook, Massachusetts
119 articles 7 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To be great is to be misunderstood." ((Ralph Waldo Emerson))


Same time - same place
We were in the right place at the right time
Paths have crossed
Presents have collided
Futures exploding before us
Altering always and forever
You changed me
You fixed me
You healed me
You loved me
Thanks for that.


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on Mar. 12 2010 at 6:37 pm
Squishy-Squish SILVER, Port Richey, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"You can hurt me with the truth, but don't comfort me with your lies."

Short, simple, and absolutely fantastic.

on Mar. 10 2010 at 5:31 pm
rainbowwriter SILVER, Teaneck, New Jersey
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This is a really good piece of writing. I really think so! Congratulations! You really got the point across and still wrote it well.

BMMSKC said...
on Mar. 9 2010 at 6:17 pm
I READ A LOT OF VAMPIRE BOOKS AND THIS SOUNDS LIKE WHAT HAPPENS WHEN YOU FIND YOUR SOULMATE...WISH I COULD FIND MINE...LOVE THE POEM TOO...KEEP WRITING


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