Blue 4 --- Dust

February 27, 2010
By FreakyEyed DIAMOND, Juneau, Alaska
FreakyEyed DIAMOND, Juneau, Alaska
53 articles 29 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This, too, will pass."


when i was made of stone,
thirty-seven light-years ago,
i forgot your name all of twice
in the month of December.

you talked to me about
[gosh, i can't recall---]
the sounds inside the wood,
and you left bits of dust
in the empty paper cups;
never considerate enough
to take your own dust
with you---

and you left.



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on Apr. 11 2010 at 6:03 pm
FreakyEyed DIAMOND, Juneau, Alaska
53 articles 29 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This, too, will pass."

Wow, thank you! =]

I'm glad you liked it... I try to pinch the thoughts in the backs of people's heads... the strange phrasing is exactly what I regurgitate from my brain, haha.

^ ^'


on Apr. 11 2010 at 5:19 pm
the.kanguru GOLD, Irvine, California
16 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Why is Jesus holding a machine gun?"
"Maybe it's part of his therapy."

wow. very unique phrasing/imagery/form of the poem. i enjoyed it. :)


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