Shock

February 26, 2010
By Jessimica GOLD, Plainfield, Illinois
Jessimica GOLD, Plainfield, Illinois
13 articles 13 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry over someone who won't cry over you."


Words.

Instant messaging.
Facebook.

Lauren.
Car crash.
Lauren.
Dead.

Tears.
Shock.
Numb.
Beg.
Plead.
Cry.
Phone call.
Beg it’s not true.
Reality.
Pain.
Cry.
Shock.
Dead.
Car.
Crash.
Tree.
Rain.
Seatbelt.
Open door.
Gone.
Dead…

Shock.


The author's comments:
the third of a set of Three poems about my friend Lauren who was killed in a car accident. No one is ever prepared for someone to tell them a loved one is dead, it's always a shock.

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Jessimica GOLD said...
on Sep. 8 2010 at 1:31 am
Jessimica GOLD, Plainfield, Illinois
13 articles 13 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry over someone who won't cry over you."

Thank you for your comment. I'm sorry I didnt realize someone commented until now.

Thank you for taking the time to read it,

and I'm sorry for your loss as well.


on May. 21 2010 at 6:50 pm
Clementine SILVER, Gustavus, Alaska
5 articles 2 photos 47 comments
My friend drove off the dock last year. I felt the exact same way when I got the call. I didn't want to believe it. Thanks for writing this.

Jessimica GOLD said...
on Mar. 6 2010 at 9:25 am
Jessimica GOLD, Plainfield, Illinois
13 articles 13 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry over someone who won't cry over you."

Thank you, I really appreciate it.

on Mar. 5 2010 at 7:51 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

I am sorry about your friend.


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