Rain Facade

February 23, 2010
Pouring down the street
making a drip-drop beat
Thundering in the sky
with flashes of lightning passing by
Wetting my feet
turning into sleet
Fogging up cars
forming streaks on the windows like bars





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HelloKitty95 said...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 4:34 am
I really like this! I could paint a picture to it. :-). Very detailed! I just found this site and this one stood out to me. Its very inspirational. Good job!
 
midas-is-king said...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 10:45 pm
nice rain description....I could just see the rain. Great job.
 
fictionfanatic replied...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 7:33 pm
Thank you so much for commenting. I really appreciate it!! :)
 
heather_feather said...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 10:44 pm
Fantastic! Two thumbs up! Keep 'em coming.
 
superfan said...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 12:10 pm
Yay! Great poem!
 
heather_feather replied...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 10:33 pm
Fantastic! Two thumbs up! Keep 'em coming.
 
midas-is-king replied...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 10:37 pm
nice rain description....I could just see the rain. Great job.
 
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