Rain Facade

February 23, 2010
By fictionfanatic GOLD, Garland, Texas
fictionfanatic GOLD, Garland, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Love doesn't hide it stays and fights. It goes the distance. That's why God made love so strong." "The road to life may be long and hard but know that God is with you every step of the way."


Pouring down the street
making a drip-drop beat
Thundering in the sky
with flashes of lightning passing by
Wetting my feet
turning into sleet
Fogging up cars
forming streaks on the windows like bars



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on Mar. 5 2010 at 7:33 pm
fictionfanatic GOLD, Garland, Texas
16 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love doesn't hide it stays and fights. It goes the distance. That's why God made love so strong." "The road to life may be long and hard but know that God is with you every step of the way."

Thank you so much for commenting. I really appreciate it!! :)

HelloKitty95 said...
on Mar. 5 2010 at 4:34 am
HelloKitty95, Garland, Texas
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I really like this! I could paint a picture to it. :-). Very detailed! I just found this site and this one stood out to me. Its very inspirational. Good job!

on Mar. 4 2010 at 10:45 pm
nice rain description....I could just see the rain. Great job.

on Mar. 4 2010 at 10:44 pm
Fantastic! Two thumbs up! Keep 'em coming.

on Mar. 4 2010 at 10:37 pm
nice rain description....I could just see the rain. Great job.

on Mar. 4 2010 at 10:33 pm
Fantastic! Two thumbs up! Keep 'em coming.

superfan said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 12:10 pm
Yay! Great poem!


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