Broken

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The Loud Silence
Barren Chaos
Ethereal Reality
Bleak Desolation

Screams
Sobs
Shrieks
The Dawning realization
That it's over

It's over
And were left behind

Left to
Pick up the
Broken pieces
Of a Broken Nation





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Sarahnade This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 18, 2010 at 5:26 pm
This is good, but it reminds me of "Left Behind" the movies. It's very unique though. And I love the structure of course.
 
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 11, 2010 at 6:30 pm
this is deep and heavy and uplifting at the samt tine. i wanna start a riot. thank you captain, 5 stars.
 
Lonleydandy said...
Mar. 28, 2010 at 8:57 pm
I kinda like this one!
 
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