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Don't

February 22, 2010
By bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."


I wish they'd let me talk to you, tell you it's okay;
Tell you I'm here.

I want to hold your fragile body in my arms and caress all your worries and distresses;

I want to be the first one you see when you awake for the first time in what seems like eternity

Everyone's waiting for you, foreseeing that you will no longer be the same;
The same guy with the most stupid grin I've ever seen;

Did you hear?
They're all lingering on every word the doctor speaks of, yearning for just one slight possibility that you'll survive;

You want to be able to see the sunrise at the very crack of dawn and be able to witness it just fall over the horizon just before dark;
Don't become a part of the beautiful things in life, witness it;
With me

You have to pull through,
Prove them all wrong;
I know it's hard, I know what it's like to just thirst for that slim chance of freedom and to give up on this convoluted and corrupt world;

But please, for everybody's sake, for mine,
Don't;


The author's comments:
This is about when I found out my friend was really hurt and had to be sent to the hospital. He has been in a coma for almost a week now. I'm just praying that he wakes up soon<3

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on May. 1 2010 at 8:52 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

I love this!  Great job!

-Rose


on Mar. 25 2010 at 6:42 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
23 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."

ha aww thxxx uu!!!!

on Mar. 25 2010 at 6:27 pm
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x PLATINUM, Nanuet, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"To me, Fearless is not the absense of fear. It's not being completely unafraid. To me, Fearless is having fears. Fearless is having doubts. Lots of them. To me, Fearless is living in spite of those things that scare you to death."
— Taylor Swift

awwww. this is amazzzzzing!! i <333 this!

i'm so glad he's out of a coma.

i know how much you were praying & hoping for him

luv itttt!