February 22, 2010
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and you scare me
you hold my interest.

and i will run
so you cant run first.

and you will break me
nothing was there to start.

and i will cry
because i'll realize it must be me. not them.

and i'll move on
because like the rest he never got close enough

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Sarbear This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 9:19 pm
this is so unique. i love how you put -why- and then answered the question. i like the repeated word it helped the poem flow nicely. i can relate to this poem and enjoyed reading it. check out my poems too :)
TheDreamer replied...
May 6, 2010 at 8:39 pm
same here. adding why and answering gave it a distinct power. great job!
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