im here.

February 22, 2010
By torytrom SILVER, Wilbraham, Massachusetts
torytrom SILVER, Wilbraham, Massachusetts
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does this sound familiar?
my heart cries out for you.
the sharp ice
in your words
tell a different story
her brightness overwhelms me
ghosts walk in daylight
can they not see me?
my reflection is tangible,
china bones and paper skin.
touch me.
inbred with a sense of dignity
and restraint
are we even human?

The author's comments:
The real me is invisible to the world. Don't we all feel as if no one can see us sometimes?

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on Dec. 2 2010 at 1:42 pm
LilStinka SILVER, Lynden, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Advice is what we ask for when we already know the answer but wish we didn't. - Erica Jong
Tis an ill cook that cannot lick his own fingers. - Shakespeare

i hope things get better :)


the poem is  really good though! keep it up!


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