My Little Sister

February 12, 2010
By ModernMissBennet BRONZE, Spanaway, Washington
ModernMissBennet BRONZE, Spanaway, Washington
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Sticky, sweet
scent of cereal bars
lingering
in her breath,
she wakes me to play with
little kid puzzles.
Hair curls rest
like soft yellow butter cream
on a porcelain
doll face
graced by
sweeping innocence.
She looks at me
and tells me
I'm "cooler than
Cinderella"


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This is about my little sister. Please comment!!!!

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on Nov. 4 2010 at 7:02 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Ooooh, I love this! It reminded me a little bit of my little sister :)

I love the flow, as Powd3er kinda said :) You have great talent, I especially loved the last line.

Thank you for sharing your talent :)


on Feb. 26 2010 at 2:35 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx


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