My Little Sister

Sticky, sweet
scent of cereal bars
lingering
in her breath,
she wakes me to play with
little kid puzzles.
Hair curls rest
like soft yellow butter cream
on a porcelain
doll face
graced by
sweeping innocence.
She looks at me
and tells me
I'm "cooler than
Cinderella"





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IamtheshyStargirl said...
Nov. 4, 2010 at 7:02 pm

Ooooh, I love this! It reminded me a little bit of my little sister :)

I love the flow, as Powd3er kinda said :) You have great talent, I especially loved the last line.

Thank you for sharing your talent :)

 
Powd3er said...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 2:35 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx
 
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