My Little Sister

February 12, 2010
Sticky, sweet
scent of cereal bars
in her breath,
she wakes me to play with
little kid puzzles.
Hair curls rest
like soft yellow butter cream
on a porcelain
doll face
graced by
sweeping innocence.
She looks at me
and tells me
I'm "cooler than

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IamtheshyStargirl said...
Nov. 4, 2010 at 7:02 pm

Ooooh, I love this! It reminded me a little bit of my little sister :)

I love the flow, as Powd3er kinda said :) You have great talent, I especially loved the last line.

Thank you for sharing your talent :)

Powd3er said...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 2:35 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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