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February 17, 2010
By Llbid BRONZE, Littleton, Colorado
Llbid BRONZE, Littleton, Colorado
3 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
I say violence is necessary. It is as American as cherry pie.
-Hubert Geroid Brown


Dreams frozen.
Life broken.
If I were to die,
Hold on to the snow
that froze my dreams.
Hold on to the memories
that broke
my life.


The author's comments:
My friend said this was sad and deranged. I don't think so but who knows??????

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on Dec. 2 2011 at 9:19 pm
TheCapturedBat GOLD, Belen, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
If all else perished and he remained, I should still continue to be; and if all else remained, and he were annihilated, the universe would turn to a mighty stranger.
-- Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights

this is sad. in fact, it is heartbreaking, but that is what makes it beautiful. i wouldn't call it deranged. it is much deeper than that.

Llbid BRONZE said...
on Apr. 3 2010 at 8:30 pm
Llbid BRONZE, Littleton, Colorado
3 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
I say violence is necessary. It is as American as cherry pie.
-Hubert Geroid Brown

Haha thanks. You too. I want to get my writing published but when ever I show my stories to someone they freak because they think I'm suffering from deppresion or I'm some kind of violent nut job hahaha. Teen ink like rejected one of my stories because I think it was to violent or dark or somethin lol

on Apr. 3 2010 at 7:23 pm
StephenKingfan7 BRONZE, East Hartford, Connecticut
1 article 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What do you know for sure?" - Gene Siskel

i like it.  Its really good. thanks for your comments on my story. youur crazy good. did u know we both live in CT?


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