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Dreams frozen.
Life broken.
If I were to die,
Hold on to the snow
that froze my dreams.
Hold on to the memories
that broke
my life.





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TheCapturedBat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 9:19 pm
this is sad. in fact, it is heartbreaking, but that is what makes it beautiful. i wouldn't call it deranged. it is much deeper than that.
 
StephenKingfan7 said...
Apr. 3, 2010 at 7:23 pm
i like it.  Its really good. thanks for your comments on my story. youur crazy good. did u know we both live in CT?
 
Cracked This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 3, 2010 at 8:30 pm
Haha thanks. You too. I want to get my writing published but when ever I show my stories to someone they freak because they think I'm suffering from deppresion or I'm some kind of violent nut job hahaha. Teen ink like rejected one of my stories because I think it was to violent or dark or somethin lol
 
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