An Ode to California

February 17, 2010
By DalekJast BRONZE, Cochranville, Pennsylvania
DalekJast BRONZE, Cochranville, Pennsylvania
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In the south, a barren wasteland
The land of deserts and cacti,
Yet full of people and palm trees
Olive trees and waves
Tourism, Hollywood
Gold-panning
In the north, a mountainous, rich, fertile land
Skiing slopes and vineyards
Sunsets over the ocean
Canyons, artichokes
California


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JeanGrey GOLD said...
on Jun. 1 2010 at 8:12 pm
JeanGrey GOLD, Mason City, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"I am so clever that sometimes I don't understand a single word of what I am saying."-Oscar Wilde

Very nice. I like your style. It is simple,not too much, and you don't try so hard to be deep like others. You just have a nice flow and rhythm. Good.


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