The Perfect Illusion This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

February 5, 2010
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They only see the front of me
The side I keep so perfectly
But when I turn around to flee
They see the gaping hole in me

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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Dragonfly_Girl said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 9:01 pm
Absoloutely Fabulous! Well rythm, great beat, easy to relate to! Comment on my work?
 
Angie.Hudak This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 6:48 pm
This is really amazing. It can apply to everyone and how we all feel in reality. Check out some of my writing, if you get the chance[: but really beautiful poem. Keep it up, for sure!
 
A.M.Wilson said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 3:03 am

wow thats was pretty good :)

 

 
ZiRaww! said...
Feb. 25, 2010 at 9:25 am
Reminds me of people,including myself. that I know.
 
Victoria~Alexis This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 25, 2010 at 11:04 am
yea, i think in a way it relates to everyone. i mean i highly doubt there is someone out there who doesnt have a dark little secret or has had tragedy happen the them, or somone around them, before.
 
ZiRaww! replied...
Feb. 25, 2010 at 12:36 pm
Yes it does. I'm pretty sure
 
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