February 10, 2010
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Stars above mirrored on
Sooth water below
Winking brightly
In the dark night,
Twinkling soundlessly
A show of believing
Stars above are alive.

Lay on your back
On grass gaing up
To bright stars like
Sparkling glitter on
Deep black velvet
Moving thought the sky
All night until dark.

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+Razor+ This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 7, 2010 at 11:59 am

I really like this piece. It reminds me of when I use to live in Vancouver. I would always lay in my yard and wish on everystar. and when I was done, what ever problems I had, always seemed minior to the how many stars there was.

Thank you for sharing this with us.

Wolfayne replied...
Sept. 30, 2010 at 4:20 pm

Thanks for the thanks!

I never did that; I wish I could have.  I've always lived near a ot of lights, and I could hardly ever see more thn one star.  Hospitals, cities, malls, shows, you name it.

Anyways, this is how I always dreamed it would kind of be like.  I have a huge imagination at times, but I'm glad you liked it.

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