All I Can Say

February 15, 2010
Since when do I sweat,
when I should be cold?

Since when do I hope to have something to hold?

Since when does the night,
seem like its day?

Since I met you,
that's all I can say.

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MoonlitxRose said...
Jun. 10, 2010 at 12:28 pm
Nice rhyme scheme you got going on here! I liked it! Again though, I wish this was longer!
lostnhim replied...
Jun. 10, 2010 at 7:58 pm
Thank you! ( I will try and make some longer ones...) (:
Shahed said...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 9:40 pm
I love this!!!
so amazing!!
you should try writing longer poems.. so I can live thru them longer!
lostnhim replied...
Feb. 20, 2010 at 11:51 pm
Thanks, and i will keep you in mind when writing new poems, and make sure to write some longer ones!
Shahed replied...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 9:13 am
sounds great! I cant wait till you post new ones!
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