All I Can Say

February 15, 2010
By AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.


Since when do I sweat,
when I should be cold?

Since when do I hope to have something to hold?

Since when does the night,
seem like its day?

Since I met you,
that's all I can say.


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on Jun. 10 2010 at 7:58 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

Thank you! ( I will try and make some longer ones...) (:

on Jun. 10 2010 at 12:28 pm
MoonlitxRose BRONZE, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"If at first you don't succeed, try again."

Nice rhyme scheme you got going on here! I liked it! Again though, I wish this was longer!

Shahed GOLD said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 9:13 am
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

sounds great! I cant wait till you post new ones!

on Feb. 20 2010 at 11:51 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

Thanks, and i will keep you in mind when writing new poems, and make sure to write some longer ones!

Shahed GOLD said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 9:40 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

I love this!!!

so amazing!!

you should try writing longer poems.. so I can live thru them longer!


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