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You Said

February 14, 2010
By Anonymous

You said you cared
You said you loved me
You said I was you’re first
You said I was you’re last
You said we were forever
You said I was the one
You said you’d do anything for me
You said nothing mattered but me
You said I could trust you
You said you trusted me
You said you’d never hurt me
You said no matter what
You said I was beautiful
You said you’d never let go
You said I was you’re everything
You said we could do anything
You said we were a happily ever after
You said everything
And it was all a lie.


The author's comments:
I wrote this when I was sad and confused after my boyfriend of 5 months broke up with me. I always find poetry comes out easier when I'm in the mood, so I wrote this. It is probably very relatable to many girls my age. I wrote this because writing poetry helps me get my thoughts down on paper and it helps me out a lot.

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DancinDiva said...
on Aug. 9 2010 at 12:35 am
DancinDiva, Gloucester, Massachusetts
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Live life to your fullest XD

thanks! yah i'll check it out!

on Apr. 20 2010 at 5:47 pm
LoveNmhyLiife BRONZE, Roanoke, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Its easy to fall inlove but it's very hard to fall out of it"

that was very very very inspirational i loved that poem but you should check out mines to its called You Said