Rushing Water | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Poetry
  3. Free Verse
  4. Rushing Water

Rushing Water

February 14, 2010
By AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
More by this author
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

View profile

Rushing water,
through cries I plunder.
You drag me under.

Rushing water,
be still and calm.
For winter is gone.
You need no fury.

© Anton J., Philadelphia, PA

Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar Articles

Previous Next
Poetry
The Eternal Sea
By Anonymous
Poetry
Doll House Living
By sgrace SILVER
West Chester, Pennsylvania
sgrace SILVER, West Chester, Pennsylvania
5 articles 22 photos 18 comments
View profile
Poetry
Death After Life
By sHaDoWnInJa PLATINUM
West Jordan, Utah
sHaDoWnInJa PLATINUM, West Jordan, Utah
31 articles 0 photos 3 comments
View profile
Poetry
The Death Sentence
By Chris Shu BRONZE
Fort Lee, New Jersey
Chris Shu BRONZE, Fort Lee, New Jersey
1 article 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
Breathing
By costarican93 GOLD
Washington, Louisiana
costarican93 GOLD, Washington, Louisiana
14 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The city looks so pretty do you want to burn it with me?"- Hollywood Undead

View profile
Poetry
Lost now found
By BarrelRacer GOLD
Huber Heights, Ohio
BarrelRacer GOLD, Huber Heights, Ohio
10 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Bring The Challenge or Eat My Dust.

View profile

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 5 comments.

AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 4 2010 at 6:25 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

View profile
Thanks! Thats a good way to look at it... I never thought of it like that... I only thought about an actual river when I wrote it.... I was nowhere near as creative. Kudos to you! I like your version better! (:
MoonlitxRose BRONZE said...
on Jun. 25 2010 at 11:07 am
MoonlitxRose BRONZE, Albuquerque, New Mexico
1 article 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If at first you don't succeed, try again."

View profile
AW! I see this as someone trying to calm their best friend down because he or she are very upset about something and you just happen to be pulled into that situation and you're trying your best to calm them down. Nice job! ^_^
Shahed GOLD said...
on Mar. 30 2010 at 6:03 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

View profile
You're very welcome!
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 30 2010 at 11:00 am
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

View profile
Thank you!!!
Shahed GOLD said...
on Mar. 29 2010 at 8:10 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

View profile
Its simply short and sweet!