In the rain

February 13, 2010
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Falls down.
On me.
Hits my bare skin.
Refreshes my tired body.
My nerves are alive.
My senses are hightened.
I turn.
Breathing deeply.
Clean, cold air.
My head is tilted back.
Moisture running down my throat.
Purifying me.
Rushing through my veins.
A tingling sensation.
It stops.
And all I feel is wet, cold water.
Running over my bare skin.
Soaking through thin clothes.
I shiver.
Walk slowly forward.
Towards shelter.

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awesomeSarahPoetPerson said...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 8:42 pm
Finally they post our poems. I read it before but i still love it
izzyhorse replied...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 9:22 pm
Awwwwwwwwww thx Sarah
Robyn said...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 2:40 pm
NICE IZZ. I rated :)
izzyhorse replied...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 3:16 pm
Thx Robyn =)
simka09 said...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 6:58 pm
this poem is beutifull
love it keep writing :)
izzyhorse replied...
Feb. 20, 2010 at 4:04 pm
Thank you =)
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